Ok then analise this 1?

diagnose who u meet


suck them in with a treat


hang them up by their feet


throw them back 2 the street


it all depends on how they rate


on the scale as a mate


for the lies that they create


god penalise and turn 2 hate


the way they think we can retrain


choosing when 2 become a stain


left out 2 soak in poaring rain


because its happened once again


manic darkness without a light


beaten and abused just 4 spite


long ago gave up the fight


stomach muscles forever tight


hurry and swallow that dirty pill


drink that piss 4 an over fill


dark depression get up and kill


attack that body **** be still


unconsious lay in the boot


reason bieng wearing a suit


blood and pain all 4 a root


another life 2 pollute


notice the grey and dismall sky


see how the birds refuse 2 fly


in a world where no one trys


its not just babies who want 2 cry

Ok then analise this 1?
You know most word processing programs have a spell-check feature. Turn it on, trust me on this one. You might also wish to turn on the grammar check functions, that will help you with the punctuation.





Look, I know you're getting all text-messagy and stuff, but poetry is supposed to be the upper end of literature, not something you punch out to your Five while standing in line at the post office.
Reply:Too sloppy to "analise."



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